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高考英语写作---扩充细节四招
发布日期:2019-04-04
高考英语写作---扩充细节四招
方法一 列举具体的实例来补充说明
1.我喜欢体育运动。
I like sports very much.
→I like sports very much,such as basketball and football.
 
2.我们青少年应尽力保护环境、拯救地球。
We teenagers should try to protect the environment and save the earth.
→ We teenagers should try to protect the environment and save the earth. For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy.
 
方法二  添加与所给信息有关的神态、动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容
1.晚饭后,这个男的走向卧室。
After supper,the man went to his bedroom.
→ After a rich meal,the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.(神态、动作)
 
2.我有时去村西的小河游泳。
I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then.
→ I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then. The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染 )
 
3.我看到了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior.
 → I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior.(心理)
 
方法三  添加与所给信息有关的原因,结果,条件,让步,手段,目的等内容
1.Tracy 来电话留言:咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。
拓展:因为她有重要的事情处理。(原因)
Tracy called,saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee.
→ Tracy called,saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee,as she has something important to attend to.
 
2.帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。
拓展:孩子们进步很快,我也受到他们父母的称赞。(结果)
I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.
→ I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy,they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me.
 
方法四  结尾发挥,写你的感受,评价,愿望,倡议等
1.Although I stood all the way home,I felt very happy for what I did.
2.I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.
3.In addition,if she would like to learn Chinese,I will be happy to help her.
4.With everyone's contribution,we can make our school a comfortable learning environment.

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